Dying/broken/forgiven.... now I begin

Born: 17-06-56....gemini.... monkey
re-born: 3-09-80
born again\found: 14-04-08
other notable dates: 10-03-68; 03-09-87; 23-03-96;
1-05-98; 31-01-02; 5-04-04

Interests: movement, stressed/transgressive embodiment, lived experience (body\space\time\relation)
expression ( word, dance, text, image, story, music, poetics)
learning, yielding......

Hopes for the blog:
offer up the wild intersectedness of lived experience and engage others in creative, expressive, perhaps irreverant, hopefully playful, and respectful encounters....
enact kindness
create moments of pause for disclosure, discovery, stillness

Saturday, November 28, 2009

spatial/shape poem: attempt #2

h a p p i n e s s

,,, is
,,,,,,,, a
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wave
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, h
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, a
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, p
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, p
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, n
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, e
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, s
,,,,,,,,,,,, s

waves back


  1. Love it! Is a shape poem with feeling shaping feelings?

  2. better than an attempt I think... I'm waving back too!

  3. Like the short line verse very much. I need to consider the spatial aspect for a bit.

  4. Keep the spatial poems coming! You've got a rare talent! :)

  5. Beautifull, yeah, happiness comes in waves, you have to learn how to surf them dough.
    Love harlequin

  6. Linda-- I liked how this one made me feel :)
    Jon... and I am waving right back atcha ;)
    Jimmy... you silver tongued devil... thanks.
    WM--glad you liked the short verse... it was how I got into the rest of it
    Derliwall-- I am having fun with these prompts... they are stretching me.
    Mariana.. thanks for the kind words.... and I am indeed surfing happiness as I never have

  7. Waving, not drowning. Liked this, very clever.