Every dancer knows the way into a dance
is through
the basic step
a pattern that repeats and sustains
rhythm, posture, motion
stillness
and
the space(s) in between
a habit of body
as impossible to resist
as
breathing
even now
when I feel its call
I can fall into the sweet forgetting
that deep attentiveness
requires
my feet seem to move of their own
accord
even though I know that's not how it works
(I know) how mercurial an effortless agility can be
and now merciless
is it any wonder
I crave and cherish
my moments of rebirth and return
I really like this one. I totally feel it. what I have learnt is even when your feet cannot move on there own accord. what body parts can... will...and it is no less a moment of rebirth and return.thank-you for finding the words to express something I could not have.It's a beautiful thing.
ReplyDeleteThe dance of the wood nymphs is hard to forget.
ReplyDeleteanonymous--glad you liked. i danced for lots of years and taught dance for lots of years and it's been a few years since i have done either.... clearly i miss it.
ReplyDeleteWM-thanks for this great comment. :)
I believe in body memory. I often practice Tai Chi and after a while the moves seem to happen without thinking about it. I suppose dance is similar. You get lost in the movement and it is a rebirth. Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteoops I commented on a totally different kind of dancing...way to over analyse.....I think it works for both though....and yes I find this humorous...whats that saying?? oh yeah keep it simple.Still doesn't take away the fact I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteMr.C. thanks! i know what you mean about getting lost in the movement.
ReplyDeletetweaty--glad you enjoyed, again.... the basic step is usually simple, ironically enough. ha.