tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post4984959656173317998..comments2023-10-31T12:16:03.276-04:00Comments on Harlequin: 8 over 6... a fledgling first try...Harlequinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-38767639440254791202011-02-28T19:15:45.619-05:002011-02-28T19:15:45.619-05:00Physician heal thyself before it's too late. ...Physician heal thyself before it's too late. But alas, so many wounds of which we know not. Is hell mankind's only fate?Mr. Charlestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17497415823443875308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-48633086476112159242011-02-27T16:39:08.567-05:002011-02-27T16:39:08.567-05:00christopher-- thanks for the thoughtful and helpfu...christopher-- thanks for the thoughtful and helpful comments; i am going to keep those in mind the next time i rustle up the courage for another try :)<br /> believe me, your poetry is not harmed by not having rhyme scheme... your work consistently honors the sweet and messy lives we live. <br /><br />madame-- thanks for the comment. it is sometimes too easy to do the self condemnation. glad you enjoyed.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-54988547845756368882011-02-27T15:41:56.575-05:002011-02-27T15:41:56.575-05:00I like the idea of tending wounds of our own makin...I like the idea of tending wounds of our own making. I think that we can send ourselves to hell all too easily.Madame DeFargehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08172239340844485940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-1463347757143182172011-02-27T01:52:58.687-05:002011-02-27T01:52:58.687-05:00Harlequin, you didn't need the (And)s since yo...Harlequin, you didn't need the (And)s since you could have implied or used punctuation without any loss or confusion at all. I like your courage and I think it worked. I feel terribly inadequate to rhyme and always bow to honor those who make it work. My rhyme schemes don't work for me at all.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.com