tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post4906546515531719287..comments2023-10-31T12:16:03.276-04:00Comments on Harlequin: Haiku: autism landscapeHarlequinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-14198347324413523912009-09-22T14:53:17.612-04:002009-09-22T14:53:17.612-04:00Thanks, Dave--- it is a nice form... I find it als...Thanks, Dave--- it is a nice form... I find it also helps out with other kinds of writing. Cheers!Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-30407535100100310552009-09-22T09:09:38.738-04:002009-09-22T09:09:38.738-04:00An interesting development . The more I think abou...An interesting development . The more I think about it, the more I admire it.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-55156013045483131062009-09-21T21:19:11.509-04:002009-09-21T21:19:11.509-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-25783580951330261532009-09-21T21:18:43.147-04:002009-09-21T21:18:43.147-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-49042813123229907672009-09-21T21:18:14.894-04:002009-09-21T21:18:14.894-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-52909818734062911592009-09-21T21:16:11.491-04:002009-09-21T21:16:11.491-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-51711079575732258422009-09-21T09:58:52.504-04:002009-09-21T09:58:52.504-04:00Saraha-- thanks so much... btw, I am so enjoying t...Saraha-- thanks so much... btw, I am so enjoying the pieces you writing at your site.Gorgeous.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-59393182611338777922009-09-21T02:41:23.949-04:002009-09-21T02:41:23.949-04:00I am always in awe of anyone who writes such. I ha...I am always in awe of anyone who writes such. I have tried *sigh* but failed miserably. This is a beauty of one; you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-1792850451685191082009-09-20T15:30:28.614-04:002009-09-20T15:30:28.614-04:00Jon-yes, it's nice how the form is able to all...Jon-yes, it's nice how the form is able to allow so much... the syllables are quite liberating that way... the k/night bit seemed to make its way through and made sense for me and for the people inhabiting the landscape<br />Derliwall.. it's the compactness that is compelling, I agree; it pushes for every word to count.Glad that Perilous worked for you<br />Pisces... great word play... thanks; I'd expect nothing less from a wordsmith like you!<br />Mariana.. not sure any of us can ever be bullet proof, not as far as life landscapes are concerned, but I am glad the lines carried the load for youHarlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-22200107582249726462009-09-18T23:25:46.873-04:002009-09-18T23:25:46.873-04:00Great words, I love the sentence in the middle, it...Great words, I love the sentence in the middle, it is great. It has a life of its own. Also the last one inspires me to thinking. Makes me wanna be bullet proof indeed.Mariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-10699256121126506422009-09-18T09:44:29.944-04:002009-09-18T09:44:29.944-04:00Nice! Nights without armour/Knights without amoreNice! Nights without armour/Knights without <i>amore</i>Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-47109060540754887192009-09-17T17:49:03.684-04:002009-09-17T17:49:03.684-04:00the word perilous really drew me in. I can feel th...the word perilous really drew me in. I can feel the environments and landscapes shifting and dropping away around me, denying them their taken for granted solidity as background. I love haiku's for their compactness. Thanks for this Harlequin :)Erikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07306936331766719305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-23293487009230859812009-09-17T14:42:52.904-04:002009-09-17T14:42:52.904-04:00Nice haiku. Especially like the last line and the ...Nice haiku. Especially like the last line and the way it rolls out. and the playfulness with k/nights... needless to say. But there you go.<br /><br />:)Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.com