tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post1664323228205320749..comments2023-10-31T12:16:03.276-04:00Comments on Harlequin: August OneHarlequinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-26427761314528175272009-08-10T12:46:10.679-04:002009-08-10T12:46:10.679-04:00SLC... thanks for the visit and this lovely commen...SLC... thanks for the visit and this lovely comment.... it is a bond that I am writing to/for//from... and it certainly exceeds any analysis I had previously experienced!<br />I will be visiting your blog... your profile is intriguing.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-82327916623730807672009-08-10T04:42:20.574-04:002009-08-10T04:42:20.574-04:00"how your footfall is familiar"
That li..."how your footfall is familiar"<br /><br />That line is most special. It hits home the notion of a bond, a connection that goes past analysis and into the instinct-part of the mind.<br /><br />Cheers.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-82143278512033432582009-08-07T22:21:10.621-04:002009-08-07T22:21:10.621-04:00Pisces--thank you for this sweet insight; indeed t...Pisces--thank you for this sweet insight; indeed there is tenderness.... and I appreciate the poise comment... this is one of the few contexts where I have a chance of approaching some semblance of poise. I shall hold this comment close.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-43081757262587262542009-08-07T10:09:03.378-04:002009-08-07T10:09:03.378-04:00always
risking authenticity
the only dance
there
i...always<br />risking authenticity<br />the only dance<br />there<br />is<br />Great lines - this poem is filled with a liberal dose of tenderness - difficult to pull off but you've done it with perfect poise.Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-42485401546218287352009-08-05T14:47:37.663-04:002009-08-05T14:47:37.663-04:00Mariana-- thanks for the kind words. I also respec...Mariana-- thanks for the kind words. I also respect how you conduct yourself in your expressiveness.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-19836664318496002042009-08-04T14:35:30.850-04:002009-08-04T14:35:30.850-04:00I agree that you are taking the risk to be authent...I agree that you are taking the risk to be authentic, that is why I follow you and respect what you are.Mariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-64530408603708019202009-08-04T09:28:13.057-04:002009-08-04T09:28:13.057-04:00WM-- I like the ice cream analogy. I suppose I am...WM-- I like the ice cream analogy. I suppose I am going for that very thing... that any reader can find a story that works given who the reader believes the narrator is or needs the narrator to be. Does this make sense?? <br />I can tell you that the inspiration for the piece was helping a beloved family member move into a new dwelling placeHarlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-51524617083826777352009-08-04T07:03:04.103-04:002009-08-04T07:03:04.103-04:00Who is it the narrator is dancing with? There is r...Who is it the narrator is dancing with? There is rich imagery here H...I think a little more information is needed to bring it to my vision.<br /><br />There are just to many thing "we" in the first line can mean. A former lover, a drug, a thought, a fear...see what I mean? With each answer the flavor over the ice cream changes.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-24355934346104715762009-08-03T11:51:09.513-04:002009-08-03T11:51:09.513-04:00Jimmy -- I so appreciate this comment; meaningful ...Jimmy -- I so appreciate this comment; meaningful in lots of ways. Thank you.<br />Punch-- the experience at the heart of this one was all about closeness and how it gets enacted. Thank you. <br />Linda--I'm glad this one resonated deeply; it came out of a deep place. Thank you. <br />Mariana-- thank you for the thoughtful comments.... I hoped to convey that taking the risk to be authentic is how I preserve it... I like seeing how you have read it.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-40938978351825861862009-08-02T23:33:24.255-04:002009-08-02T23:33:24.255-04:00I agree that proximiti does not mean connecting or...I agree that proximiti does not mean connecting or communicating.<br />Don't risk autenticity, I do not think you should do that, the inmediate effects can be good, but on the long run you decieve yourself.<br />Lovely poem harlequinMariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-83759851261840428562009-08-02T16:06:58.360-04:002009-08-02T16:06:58.360-04:00I love this one. I can feel it in the bones. Lovel...I love this one. I can feel it in the bones. Lovely and extremely well done piece. Thank you<br />LindaLinda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-81969785679708397952009-08-02T13:27:17.569-04:002009-08-02T13:27:17.569-04:00Reading this bring a sense of closeness.Reading this bring a sense of closeness.Punchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17904275145636893257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6111037399323673543.post-52979048545856576972009-08-02T13:07:26.386-04:002009-08-02T13:07:26.386-04:00Your prose is far above the usual standard. Good f...Your prose is far above the usual standard. Good for you.Barlinniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07555629852012324360noreply@blogger.com